Erotica Harem

I read one of theirs and it wasn't bad. The two mains were lusting/falling for each other real fast and their relationship was based solely on sex and magic. Although it was fun to read and highly erotic, when I got to the happy ending I felt disappointed and left with many questions about how these two strong characters would be able to be together afterward. Basically, I felt the relationship building severely lacked. That part was unrealistic to me.

But that's me. It's fantasy, not reality. It seemed the author was really good at writing the erotic part but sucked at the other parts leaving them all in passive voice without a feel of the now.

That doesn't stop me from submitting. Won't know until you try I say. Those of you published authors probably stand a better chance there because you have the experience and can list that in your cover letters. I think experience matters.

Ok, I'll shut up cause I gots skads to do today.

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