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Nov 29, 2006 at 5:58pm
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Re: Board Update
Hey Chrome, I read the story, I couldn't leave a review, and so thought I would post something real quick, I like how you took us through an entire day of his, but you don't really have anything happening. This may be better as a prologue instead of the 1st chapter, as you normally want something good to happen in the first chapter!!!

Up to you hun!! Thanks for the read!!

Hugs,
Jen

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Board Update · 11-29-06 2:24pm
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Re: Re: Board Update · 11-29-06 6:27pm
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