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Nov 28, 2006 at 6:58pm
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Review-666 shooter pro&ch1
Well I think you have come a long way in becoming a better writer, you have it all, religion...good vr evil, showing and not telling and you start with a little twist, I would recommend putting the folder for the book here, or adding the link for the next chapter at the bottom of the previous, in fact you should probably do that anyway since you have them as static items!!!

Great job!!!

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Jen

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Review-666 shooter pro&ch1 · 11-28-06 6:58pm
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