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Nov 21, 2006 at 9:54pm
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Re: Need some reviews
by A Non-Existent User
Hi Sproke,

Read through all 3 chapters on my lunch break. Really good war story, plenty of hard ball talk and action to match. Could use a bit more description in places, otherwise a good read. Well done!

I've emailed you a couple of suggestions.

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