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Nov 20, 2006 at 4:45am
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Review of Relic of War Cpt2
by A Non-Existent User
Sent you a review on this hope it helps.

I think your writing needs a little tightening to make things flow a tad better, but I'm sure you'll get there.

Keep writing.

Jamie.

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Review of Relic of War Cpt2 · 11-20-06 4:45am
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