Ratatosk Writings - Poetry Review Forum

Clear title - but it doesn't really describe the point of the piece (the picture)but it flagged up to me the purpose of the piece, and the prose followed this signpost.

There was a potential here for the piece to ramble, but it doesn't. You have used the page to set out the words with careful emphasis, and heightening drama with the shortening of the word rows.

It scans well when read outloud, and I did enjoy it.

Many thanks for sharing Shani





Shani Phethean-Hubble