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Sep 2, 2006 at 6:36am
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Re: I offer three poems
Good use of the page - your setting out adds drama and vibrancy to the piece.

The emphasis of Sinful, Trust and Fate - brought coherence to the stanzas, and allowed the backstory to be easily glimpsed.

"The lustful eager consuming more" I particularly enjoyed this phrase.

Thank you so much for sharing this with me... it has made my morning.

Shani

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I offer three poems · 08-31-06 4:24pm
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