Ratatosk Writings - Poetry Review Forum

Wow - the use of different fonts on the page, really broadens and dramatises the points of the poem. The way you have set it out really appeals, and invites me into the world, encouraging and enveloping me to suspend my own belief, and subscribe to yours.

That said it also scans well outloud, and you have communicated very clearly to me your staging directions.

Love it, and don't feel I can add anything else. You really have mastered this form.

Thank you for sharing.
Shani





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