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Apr 28, 2001 at 1:20am
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Becoming by: Demure
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Becoming




I lured her in


My wicked temptations


I brushed her thoughts


Theres no taste of salvation


I undressed her bare


The bright of the skin


The emptiness of her stare


Made me calm within


The pale beauty of her face


Matched the sharpness of my knife


Piercing through her skin


I like to take my time


Moments and moments


There she lie


Moments and moments


Stares the eye


The fear of getting caught


Makes it all so arousing


Straddled in deep thoughts


I begin my incision...




Slowly cutting my subject


Slowly the life gets drained


But it's too late now




What have I become


I have killed but never loved

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Becoming by: Demure · 04-28-01 1:20am
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