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yeah i know what you mean, its harder to review the really personal pieces

maybe just tell them that though, that you can feel the emotion they put into it (thats powerful writing if you can) and just say it could be even better and more effective if they fixed the punctuation (for example, or whatever it is that needs fixing)

the suggestions are only going to help them, if they accept the help great, if not, you've tried your best

sometimes i rate on content more than on technical aspects