K'neto's Hotline

I think it's excellent to find someone willing to do reviewing! Since I'm trying to get as many long reviews as possible, I figured it was worth a shot; and of course I offer 100 GPs (I'm still fairly poor) for a 250+ review, not to mention my undying gratitude for your brutality and the open invitation to send anything at all to me for editing or review.

"Then the cat-shape was upon me, slamming into my chest – and for a moment, time seemed to stop. We hovered, connected as if by a magical umbilical, a thick heat rushing through me, loosening me, the scent of metal and earth and spice freeing me from eighteen years of prison, releasing an ancient soul.
I awoke.
- Book of the Winds, Part One: Song of the North."
Copyright Erin Pfeiffer, "Whitesong", 2004.