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I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem.

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Aug 13, 2005 at 2:16am
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Re: Im NOT Giving up - (Tuesday's)
Slaughter poetry?, Yeah, anymore than you'd dangerously dangle a participle over a precipice. I especially like those last lines:

"but I need not listen
to that keen raven’s cawing
to kibitz and berate my lines,
since “nevermore”
is never the solution."

Good stuff, Kiddo! *Smile*
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