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Boy, you get involved with a 50,000 word in a month challenge, miss checking in, and lo, what surprises greet you on the site! Anyway. What turns me off. It has been stated before (and probably better), if you can't make me feel what's going on, I'm turned off. This "Oh boy it was good and you know what I mean, like we were really going at it and it was hot" stuff is an absolute turn off. Also the "he did this and she did that then she did some more" stuff reads like a bad porno movie looks---contrived, tired, and ho hum. There's a great list here in this forum of prime erotic writing. Those turn me on. Lesser quality turns me off. Enough said. |