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Apr 23, 2024 at 10:31pm
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Hi, please tell me if this is too flowery?

Though the summer's drought had left its mark, the knee-high brown grass swayed gently in the soft but troubled Chinook Winds, causing it to ripple like the ocean's waves flowing towards and gently embracing the shore.

Also, I am writing a children's short story about the Cincinnati Reds. Can I mention the owner and head coach by name and give them a brief dialogue?

Kristina
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