#791828 added September 18, 2013 at 8:34pm Restrictions: None
Poof
Next Monday afternoon I am hosting a critique pod at my home. I am nervous already. I'll be a nervous wreck by Monday...yikes.
No zumba for me today. It was at 10 this morning and at 9:30 my micro fiction instructor emailed her critique of my story, in "Creating busy..." . I was not in the mood for zumba. I must rewrite with a new title, a specific focus (she made a suggestion, Thanksgiving) and more specific nouns. She even suggested I change the "animal" at the end to my pet lamb (because people eat mutton). What happened to my story?
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. I was not in the mood for zumba. I must rewrite with a new title, a specific focus (she made a suggestion, Thanksgiving) and more specific nouns. She even suggested I change the "animal" at the end to my pet lamb (because people eat mutton). What happened to my story?
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