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Here I am! |
| I did it. I totally did it. I retconned my own work. After a thorough analysis of "Admission v.1" , I realized something: It was totally out of character for Morgan and Katrina to behave that way. Is Katrina kinky? Well yes, but I don't think Morgan would have so willingly given herself up to an experimental BDSM session like that. At least, not the first time they were together. I suppose it can't be helped. "Admission v.1" was the first short story I wrote in the series, so I wasn't too sure of the complete history of Morgan and Katrina myself at that point. I also had no idea I was going to write any more about the characters, anyway. But in order for the story to make chronological sense in a novel version, "Admission v.1" has to go. I might revisit a similar BDSM scenario between my two main characters, but for right now, I'm replacing it with a milder, more believable scenario. When I'm done, the "Admission" currently in my port will be renamed v.1, and the newer version will be named v.2, to cut down on any confusion. |