Insight

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Wooohooo.....I received feedback on my edited version of Insight.  It was very honest and straightforward input.  I learned that my main character has an identity crises and I really need to make a decision about her personality.  :)  That's the problem with writing stories in "piecemeal".  I think my characters personality changed with each day depending on my mood, so I can't disagree with the review. 


I think I'm going to throw the whole story on writing.com to get all the feedback at once.  It may be much easier than trying to edit chapter by chapter.  I guess I'll find out.  Look for more of Insight by Monday.  I'll be busy this weekend reviewing "Dream Walker".