A Normal Life Chapter 3

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Some questions you might ask yourself while reading are:
1) Why is a sixteen year old girl taking charge when she could easily let her fiance and his parents do it?

2) How can Earlin find it in herself to laugh at William when she hasn't allowed herself to grieve?

3) Where did the old trunk and it's contents come from and why is it in the attic?

What other suggestions do you have on Chapter 3?

Thanks,

Charity