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| Prompt: Have fun with this sentence-- Excitement replaced fear until the final moment. Poem or story, it's your entry! ------- Diving Mist hovered low as if the morning was holding its breath, while I stood at the edge of the dock, my toes curled over splintered wood, with water stretching before me like a sheet of quiet glass. Deep water? What's to be afraid of but I was...always...of what I couldn't see of what might pull me under in the way a surface hides secrets like life. Behind me, I imagined a whisper "You don't have to do this!" But what of the times I didn't dare what of the times I stepped back? Ahead, the water shimmered daring me in blue and silver and my heart knocked against my ribs, but not today "Let caution write its own story." First step...the hardest... a shift of weight the second was easier like the promise to myself Then, I ran! Excitement replaced my fear and the water rose to meet me alive, cold, shocking and I broke through it... And Wow! I was newly born surfacing euphoric... and I gasped and grinned at the mist that was lifting and at the water still deep still unknown and unconquered But so was I. --------- True story! Although at my age, I don't dive anymore. . |