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'All Around the Universe' Update

’All Around the
Universe’ Update

When I started working on the Act One sentences for Episode Three, ‘All Around the Universe,’ Scene Outline for my DeathBringers scriptwriting project, I knew almost instantly something was wrong with it. Almost instantly, I knew what that something was. It was the storylines for this episode.

The storylines themselves weren’t the problem. It was how they were represented that way. For one thing, there was no background story for what these Davioms were doing. Who were they, why were they traveling around their part of the universe in a spaceship, and what were they trying to accomplish by talking to individuals about DeathBringers?

Almost everyone in the universe wants to know why these DeathBringers were all over the universe. They also want to know what happened to them about twelve thousand years ago and why they have returned now, but most of all, they want to know why they have been all around the universe.

That’s why Hond, Lythia, and Xore are traveling around in a spaceship from the planet Daviom. They are trying to answer this question. Hond is an interviewer. He’s asking the question from different planets. Lythia is running a newspaper-type business, sending out messages daily, and Xore is running a podcast-type business, sending out messages weekly.

Hond, Lythia, and Xore are trying to answer these questions about these DeathBringers this way. Unfortunately, Lythia and Xore are the storyline problems, especially in the first half of this episode. They are overlapping with their storylines. At least they were until now.

I didn’t have a lot of time today to work on this anthology project because of what my brother and I needed to accomplish today, but what time I did have today, I spent on updating this episode. After all, I almost had to start it over from scratch, especially the first half of it. Hond wasn’t the problem. Of course, I did have to update it a little bit.

It was mostly Lythia and Xore that I had to update the most. I think that I have finished updating all three storylines for this episode. Unfortunately, it took me most of my time today to write to accomplish it, and I didn’t have much time today to work on it. At the most, I had about three hours.

Unfortunately, that’s all the time I have this week to work on my DeathBringers scriptwriting project. After all, I’m returning to work tomorrow at six PM WDC time. Of course, I will try to work on this project tomorrow before I return to work, but I usually don’t have very much time to work on it if I have any time at all to do it.