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Action/Adventure: November 12, 2025 Issue [#13451]




 This week: No Wasted Space
  Edited by: Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter

"Adventure is worthwhile in itself."
— Amelia Earhart


About The Editor: Greetings! My name is Jeff Author IconMail Icon and I'm one of the regular editors of the official Action/Adventure Newsletter! I've been a member of Writing.com since 2003, and have edited more than 400 newsletters across the site in that time. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to email me directly or submit feedback in the comment box at the bottom of this newsletter.


Letter from the editor

No Wasted Space


One of the things I love about action/adventure stories is how dynamic they are. Things move quickly, and pacing is a key consideration. Because of that, I've also come to appreciate the word economy required for writing in this genre; there's very little opportunity for wasted space.

In other genres like fantasy, rich and detailed descriptions are important. You often see novels that surpass 100,000 words because the reader has come to expect rich, vivid details about the setting. Romance similarly is built upon detailed descriptions of the interplay between two romantically-linked characters. With action/adventure stories, while some detail is necessary, I'd argue that every word has to count.

With that in mind, here are some tips for paring down your words and packing as much punch as you can into each story:

*Bullet* Limit your descriptions. When you're writing detail and description, try to focus on the one or two key features of what you're describing, and only describe the things that need describing. For example, in a literary fiction book you might see a description of a living room that details the faded wallpaper, the retro furniture, the ancient television, and the worn carpet before focusing the antique grandfather clock that strikes midnight. In an action/adventure story, you can save words by focusing on what's really important in this room: giving it a dated feel, and the grandfather clock. Rather than an entire paragraph of detailed description, you accomplish the same thing with a sentence that quickly establishes the tone of the room and immediately focuses on the clock, the most important aspect of the room.

*Bullet* Steamlined dialogue. Dialogue is a remarkable element that can either take up a lot of space, or save a lot of space, depending on how you use it. A lot of banter back and forth can take up hundreds of words in a story and get you nowhere. By contrast, a carefully crafted conversation can convey a ton of information that would take paragraphs of prose to explain. By meticulously working smart dialogue into a story, you can save a ton of space and keep things moving along at a brisk pace.

*Bullet* Fewer or no subplots. With short stories in particular, there's often not enough space to deviate very far from the main story/theme you're trying to get across. In order to properly set up and pay off a subplot, it requires a lot of work (and a lot of words). In a short story, you may not have the luxury of spending that many words focused on something other than your protagonist and his or her main conflict. In longer works, you can still run into the subplot problem if they don't feed into the main narrative in some way, ideally all coming together in a big, active conclusion rather than requiring individual resolutions.

As writers, we don't always have the luxury of spending as many words as we'd like to write our stories. We're often limited by story length and are sometimes even at the mercy of pacing and structure. As a result, we can't afford to have any wasted space in action/adventure stories. That might mean cutting down some dialogue or omitting some descriptive elements, but we have to do what's best for our stories; if we're limited by the number of words or amount of time we can dedicate to description, we just have to make sure every single word counts.

Until next time,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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