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Review #4841927
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         Review for entry/chapter: "On the Night of HalloweenOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Ah, a cute little poem about Halloween, for a contest it seems. It's always nice to find someone trying their hand at such things, as those can be a lot of fun. I know that I have a few floating around, here and there. Some are good, others are moving. The trick is to always try to find a reason to write - that is key. In this case - Halloween.

Thoughts
A cute poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Might want to make the key words pop, somehow. *Wink*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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