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 The Thorny Little Plant Open in new Window. [E]
Growing up can be hard, even for a plant.
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Review by JACE Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi 1893 Author Icon .

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "The Thorny Little Plant" Open in new Window.. Hi. I found your humble offering on the site's Read & Review feature.

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. This reads like a children's Hallmark movie. You don't say, but I wonder if you wrote this for the Children's Writing contest that's going on currently.

I thought this was written perfectly for children. It was easy to read with concepts easily understandable by children. It's a great story to be read to the very young. Covering such topics as fear, anger, happiness, sadness, and caring, you get the message across to children that all these emotions and more will happen in their lives, and they must learn to deal with them.

I also liked that you wrote it using an extra-large font.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

I found no problems with the writing mechanics of your story. Well done.

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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