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Death Bed Promise Open in new Window. [18+]
You have to admire a wife who keeps her word... (Adult, Dark Humor)
by 🌝 HuntersMoon Author Icon
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Dude,... my words,... what to write?

Sorry, Ken, but I don't like you very well right, now. I had to punch the Read & Review button about four times to get a poem, and this was what I got. I got the humor, and I don't like, that I kinda laughed at something so inappropriate.

Ergo, I'm giving you 4 stars for bad taste. (*Wink*tee, hee, hee,...so sad)

Now, let me hasten to the part I can review with a clear conscience. 14 tercets, 42 lines, rhyme scheme of a-a-b c-c-b with every two tercets in tandem, and the rhythms are mixed throughout the poem with trimeter and tetrameter as well as iambic and anapestic meter included.

I know you're a great writer, Ken, but I must confess, "This was a difficult read for me." Obviously, I could have written the word, but I think you get the _____



I'm leaving, now. Where does one find soap for the mind.
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