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 | Tornado Ghost  [13+] Writer's Cramp Entry 2/16/20  |
| Hello ♥OctOGre tHiNg♥  I noticed this story in your portfolio as I was moseying around.  First Impression: Your title caught my eye. Wow, "Tornado Ghost!" What's not to attract my attention here.  It sounds so mysterious and scary. I just had to read about it.Furthermore: When I found that this is Non-Fiction, I was immersed in this story. I know it is a contest prompt about the "spirit of a loved one paying a visit." But knowing this really happened to your aunt and to you when she she showed you the figure that looked like your Dad right after the tornado passed, it sent chills down my spine! I, like you, believe our loved ones send us little messages. We know it's them because we feel a certain calm at the time. I always talk to my mother, especially when I need her help doing something she was very good at. I feel she is guiding me along and feel quite content and feel the love. I really can understand how you felt. Your aunts sound like they were lovely ladies and well loved by you. They were close to your Dad. You could feel his presence when around them. My aunt was my last aunt. She was my mother's baby sister. I was very close to her. I miss that I can't talk to her anymore on the phone. It ends that generational line and close connection to my Mom. Observation: Easy fix typo: "Trees were twisted in two and car ports where [were] blown aside." Parting Thoughts:  I could feel the spiritual pull of this story. It had to be so frightening for your aunt when that tornado hit between hers and her neighbor's house. That is too close for comfort. I've been in areas where tornadoes hit. Luckily, no severe damage. Conclusion:  Thank you for sharing this personal story about your father's spirit catching your eyes after such a frightening event. I know you must still feel his spirit as I do my mother's. It's a beautiful thing to experience. I do believe in angels and messages from loved ones. Until next time--Believe on! Regards, WebWitch  This is a
  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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