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Semper Fidelis  [E] What is love anyway?  |
| Hi Amethyst Autumn Angel It's me, Ken, and I spun the cylinder of the Read & Review revolver... and this popped into the chamber.  It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Semper Fidelis" .✨ Impressions/Thoughts: I can tell by the words and emotions you've woven together that this is more than just an entry. It is a testament of your love. While similar words have been spoken, these come from your heart and that makes it unique to you. You can't be more creative than that! Free verse generally contains poetic lines and poetic imagery that distinguish it from prose. I felt that this was missing the flow that poetry has and felt it was very prose-like. That said, Robert Frost once said, "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." I could see the poetry and - more importantly - feel the emotion in this. ✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:   An simple but overall good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more. 🤗 Keep 'em coming! Ken  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 10/07/2025 @ 10:18am EDT