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 Few lines on your birthday Open in new Window. [E]
What else is an expression of love for our dear ones than few words from heart....
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

This is a lovely poem that reads with a rhythmic, repetitive quality almost like a rap. We see your sincerity of expression as you share how much this person means to you. The treasure that they are is portrayed clearly and warmly. I love the historicity of this piece, going back to the days when WdC was Stories.com.

I would recommend using larger font size to ensure a pleasant reading experience across devices.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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