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🌌~Legacy~🌌 Open in new Window. [E]
A legacy is one thing meant to be left behind. How it is used by others is another story.
by 🐺Wolfkingdom🏰 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, *Wolf2**CastleLeft*

I noticed this on the sidebar and the emojis in the title made me guess it was yours. That's a distinctive way to set your work apart from the rest, especially in cases where we may not see the subtitle.

Your theme is thoughtful, asking us what our legacy will be and reminding us not to fret about how others will use it. What they do is up to them. It's advice we can use even while we're alive, as we consider our reputation. We create ourselves by how we treat others, and it's not our responsibility beyond that, as to what they think of us. If they don't like us, that's their problem, as long as we mean well and have done our best to be kindly and respectful.

The rhymes are steady, and it flows well on the page, though I usually recommend a larger font size to ensure maximum readability across devices. Perhaps even consider using navy blue font color to create a more memorable and distinguished item appearance.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*



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