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Wishes For A Princess Open in new Window. [E]
Written for Stormy's Poetry Contest.
by Morticia Wednesday Megan Rose Author Icon
Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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         I enjoyed reading your Fantasy poem! The first verse hooked me and set the scene nicely. I liked how you wrote how the trees smelled as the princess ran through it. The next verse shows some of the conflict she feels by how her father acts toward her with the knight she loves. She meets a fairy and wolf a long the way, and I thought it ended in a beautiful way. *Stary*

         The only feedback I have for your consideration is to watch a couple of word repeats, which are found in these stanzas: the Princess and her hand. It's not crucial or anything, but for me, it slowed it down a little for me. I think it would be great to update your description to draw in more readers because it's a beautiful poem.

         You do well with your descriptions to make the scene come alive, and it was easy for me to visualize the scene. It told a whole story, and you captured all of the elements to write a nice Fantasy poem! *Starstruck*
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