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Review #4832981
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Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six Open in new Window. [13+]
where I will store my weekly poetry challenge poems plus a few other related poems
by JCosmos Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "week two Sam's first Kiss " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, sir!

I'm here as a fellow member of PPC6 *Smile*

At this point, I've realized your Sam character is a cognate for yourself and your autobiographical experiences. I love how you've done this across your portfolio, giving us hints of your backstory and wrapping it up in what looks like odd, disjointed rambles about one particular character just to make it easier. This is a funny, heartfelt description of that first kiss of Sam's dream lady, in a far distant land under the shadows of wartime. I hope they have a long and lovely life together *Wink*

As always, I appreciate your giant font and double spacing, and you've included the prompt for reference.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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