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 Picnic in the Park Open in new Window. [E]
A much awaited summer event ruined by the English weather!
by CarolK Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

I love this quaint, amusing and thoroughly British poem. It shares all about what happened in whimsical rhymes that make it fun and enjoyable. You include lots of visual details like the French onion soup and the people in costumes. This keeps it grounded in relatable moments that make us smile and hope you had a better picnic day some other time *Laugh*

I might suggest using Size 4 Verdana font to make sure your item stays focused on the page and to ensure a compatible reading experience for all. Genres are a key element of all items here: I would suggest Environment, Nature, Experience, Community, Entertainment, Regional, or Family.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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