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Review #4832406
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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 and PPC 6 Open in new Window. [13+]
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC6 challenge, though I don't know if Lilli will set up the review incentive forum this time around. I love having these soft, easy things to review, especially now when it's party time!

You have such a way with poetry, crafting striking and unique images which make good use of the prompts. I can feel the pain of the narrator as they desire to wipe away the pain of their loved one. It's a haunting theme, one that carries a lot of weight these days with so much suffering in the world.

It balances nicely, though I've heard one should vary the line lengths a bit more. But poetry is like painting - anything goes!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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