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Writing To A Weekly Prompt
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, sir!

I don't believe I've ever reviewed you before. Nice to meet you here with the Promptly Poetry Challenge *Hug1**Smile**Hug2* I love a decent poet, and you seem quite gifted.

This is a charming, sweetly romantic poem about love and that magical first kiss. You've painted the same old, same old picture - tale as old as time - with a gentle artistry that tugs on our heartstrings. Someone else might gag at such goofy sweetness, but as a person deeply familiar with cutesy pop music like Ed Sheeran, I can quickly identify and appreciate this. I hope it has some autobiographical sincerity, as you tap into a lifetime of beautiful memories to create heartfelt poems for this challenge.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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