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 Three For Tea Open in new Window. [E]
A weekly tea party with Daddy turns interesting when Jesus shows up.
by Crissy~Baby! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Crissy!

I really enjoyed this quick, sweet story about a little girl and her daddy. It tugs on the heartstrings and helps us think about how we would lead our children spiritually when they begin asking questions. I appreciate the large, clear font and the three genres you've selected. And I love how Daddy accepts that his girl is interested in Jesus and is willing to bring her to church to learn about Him in a safe and affirmative way, even if he doesn't believe in Jesus himself.

I found the leap from Daddy saying "People in my work believe differently about how we are made" to Cindy thinking Jessica is telling her that Jesus made us, to be a little bit of a stretch logically for a young girl. Perhaps a little more exposition there would clarify things. Oh, and you should clarify that the cookies are "real" play cookies, otherwise there's no way for Daddy to know she gave Jesus two cookies. Also, you may want to add a pretty cover art to the item, to draw others in to read it, especially kids.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *HeartO*
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