![]() Hi Space Cat Sophie What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? Megan and Chelsea sound like they make the perfect home for Iris and every day would be full of wonderful learning surprises as Iris explores the world with her two loving mommy guides. Nice work - Your description of the story confused me for a minute until I realized it was self deprecating. That is what I assumed anyway. Well, either way good work for The Writer's Cramp! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" This site is open to all sorts of writers and reviewers. I like to keep an open mind about reading and reviewing. My own personal preference for reviews is that they be concise and more about the writing than the knowledge (or lack thereof) of the reader. My goal is to encourage you to continue your writing adventures. You are the ultimate judge as to whether I have been successful in that endeavor. Either way, I enjoyed my visit with you immensely. Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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