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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You sent me a nice review recently, so here I am to read and review in your portfolio!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Devotion is like a living thing that is always growing and shifting. I think you have effectively captured how a true love and devotion can grow and change over the course of a lifetime.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Now the empty nest life in new phase
the devotion splits between two of us
with the grace of the god, devotion resets!"

I particularly like the notion of the idea of the devotion between a couple resetting after the nest is vacated. I think, if people are wise, that happens gradually.

Very thought provoking poem about the changes and adaptations that go on in living a life in modern times.


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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

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