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Write Stuff Open in new Window. [E]
What I do.
by Dave Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary ReviewsOpen in new Window.*CakeP*


Hi Dave,
Congratulations on your nine years with WDC coming on December 8th. It is my pleasure to read your first poem when you became a member. Please remember, I'm a writer just like you and these are only my impressions. My ultimate goal is to be helpful and supportive. Thanks for sharing your work.


*ButterflyG*Title/Subtitle: "Write Stuff" is an interesting title. I do this all the time, write stuff just because I can.

The description underneath reads simply, "What I do." So right.

*ButterflyV*Message/Theme: The message is short and sweet, just sit down and write. If it makes sense, so much the better. If now, well, you wrote something. Any kind of stuff - This is good, variation is good experience for all authors, to get away from their comfort zone.

The theme is Writing down what comes to mind.

*ButterflyR*Narrative/Style: The narration is plain and simple, my kind of poem. Something that I can understand and relate to.
I think when I write a poem, so much thought goes into it that it becomes more of a chore. I feel you must have had fun writing this.

The style is hobby craft, writing, and activity.

*ButterflyO*Form/Flow: The form doesn't follow any rules as far as I can see. It rhymes and is very charming.

The flow seems off the cuff, just write what is on your mind and have fun.

         Tone: The tone is humorous, self-assured, and whimsical in ways.

         Mood: The mood is contemplative, relaxed, and thoughtful; more so, welcoming everyone to read this.

*ButterflyG*Imagery/Pace: The imagery is of the author, sitting down, pen poised, then write. 'Easy peasy' or so you made it seem. Word like obsessive need, dark stuff, or sate my soul, all are interesting expressions of what you were feeling.

The pace is fast, examining what is on your mind as I can do this and you did.

*ButterflyB*Suggestions & Typos: I didn't find any errors.

*ButterflyV*Overall Thoughts & Rating: I loved reading this, it made me smile. It's fun, light, and free - plus welcoming.

I gives this poem *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star*'s.

*ButterflyR*FAVORITE LINE:
It is my passion
to get my ration
of writing stuff to extol.
*Note*JUST MY PERSONAL OPINION:*Note*

I'm into reviewing poems today. I came across your name in Anniversary Reviews, clicked into your portfolio and there it was. I guess it was meant to be reviewed so here I am. As I said, I can relate to this writing frenzy and loved reading this poem. Thank you. *Tulipr*

*RainbowL*Write On!*RainbowR*



Take care now, keep on writing, I’ll keep on reading,
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