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 Maury Open in new Window. [13+]
An exercise in willpower.
by C Fowler Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi C Fowler!
This is good drama, and it's very well written. I thought you were going to start going overly-religious with it, but you kept an even keel (thankyou).
The thing about this piece is that it makes the reader 'think'. Just what will our final moments be like? But mainly, will it be 'dark or light, to meet whatever comes after life?'
Great spelling and telling, but the dialogue was the best. It was very real and believable.
Kee ponw ritin gon, C, and welcome to WdC!

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