Hello J'nell

My Thoughts: This such a touching story you wrote for your daughter. It shows how much you care.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that she shouldn't take this one failure as a reason to stop. I liked how encouraging this piece is.

My Suggestions: It looks like you were trying to keep to a pattern of four line stanzas, except for the beginning and end. I wasn't sure if that was intentional or not. It might be better as all four line stanzas, but the choice is yours. Your in the end should be you're.

Final Thoughts: I just really liked this. It is so nice to see someone care so much for her daughter that a poem was created. Thanks for sharing.