Good Morning! Your work is very nice. It tells of a love, perhaps not totally lost, but merely confused. It speaks of undying love and a longing for the loved one to realize what you have. Love is sweet, but can also be bitter if it is not returned in like manner. You may be able to shorten some of the lines so the rhymes are better shown, but I loved the tale you spin about unrequited love. I would like to welcome you to WDC and to say I look forward to seeing more of our work. Take care, and May God Bless!

Daddy's Girl (bonnie)