I rather like that last line, Satan is crying for his electric bill I am not sure I completely get it, but I just like it.

Hey, once upon a time that was a popular topic, where people were born evil or were made to be evil through their upbringing. I remember an old Wilkie Collins novel back in the 1800's that tackled that subject. So the idea has been around for awhile.

Of course this was mainly written for fun, and there is that quality to it. I don't think any of us reading you poem will think you are evil or mad, so you are safe there. We know you are just exploring the ideas to its fullest.

You might want to get rid of, "the" in line seven. I think it reads more naturally without it. It is the same with, "the" before "hell" in the next to last line. They just read more naturally without it them being there.

But that last line, ok, part of the reason why I like it is the humor there (whether intended or not, it is there.) Now that I see your genres, the humor was intended, so that is good. It added a nice touch to the poem.

The second stanza is the most dramatic, and of course the last is the most comical. Over-all, it was an entertaining poem.