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Oct 5, 2025 at 3:11am
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Re: In the last hour of 10/4
Youā€™re off to a good start with this short story, my only suggestion would be to tighten up the two paragraphs about three paragraphs up from the bottom.

You seem to have two spaces between paragraphs where you should only have one, unless that was intentional.

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