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Re: Review: Falling in Love with the Enemy, Chap 11, by KAT
Thank-you, very much for the kind review.

I'm going back and correct the mistakes you found.

Jacob Larson is the overseer for the land. Don't forget about him yet, because he will make an appearance in chapter 12 & 17.

Thanks again for the review. David, you're awesome!


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