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Jan 30, 2009 at 5:16pm
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Review: Faerie Realm - Chapters 1-3
Faerie Realm: Chapters 1-3

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*Note*My thoughts/feelings:
I had great fun reading the first 3 chapters of this novel. I like the way your imagination worked in writing this novel. The ideas were really magical.

*Note*My comments/suggestions:

*Note1*Plot
It was easy to follow the story. It was still a mystery, though, why they were called to Faerie Realm. I feel excited to learn more about the twins and their mission in the magical world.

*Note2*Setting
It was easy to imagine how you described the things in the Faerie Realm because of the vivid imagery. It was like I was also there.

*Note3*Characters
It was not difficult to identify the roles of the characters. I will still learn more of them in the next chapters.

Tyler
He was surely the protagonist and the good twin.

Dylan
I think he was all evil, but it might be too early to judge him why he became such a bad person.

I will surely read more of the next chapters.

Keep on writing!
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Review: Faerie Realm - Chapters 1-3 · 01-30-09 5:16pm
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