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Jan 29, 2009 at 7:37pm
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Re: Sword of Light Ch 1
Thanks for the great review becks :D I've actually been working on Dixim's description a bit more lately, and fixing up a few sentences as I re read it over and again. I'll update it some time this weekend.
The gerunds thing is interesting, i've never been commented on them before. I usually only using them to avoid the repeated 'he', 'him' and the like.
Thanks again!
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Aaron

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Sword of Light Ch 1 · 01-29-09 2:08pm
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