Erotica Harem

Thank you again (and again, again and again). "Poster Boy" is a slang term for someone who graces the covers of magazines, billboards, etc. You have to remember I'm Canadian and may talk a little strange, BUT I NEVER USE EH, okay, eh?

As for the semicolons, I try my best not to use them all that much, especially in a sentence that can use a comma instead.

She wrapped her arms around herself, (semicolon) hugging her body to try to keep Aiden within her, to meld with his essence.

To use a semicolon here is incorrect, because it does not join two groups of words that would make sense as separate sentences.

And yes, that is a missed comma in that last sentence and I'm running to fix it. Thank you again, Shells! This should be perfect by the time you finish reading it. Wait, is there such a thing as "perfect?"

Hugs,
Dusk