This is turning into a top-notch science fiction book in my opinion. I"ve read a lot of science fiction but I have no use for anything that hits me as the same thing someone else wrote coming before them.
Salient seems totally unique to me. I like the idea of telling the story chronologically backwards if that's what you mean to do, or arranging it in some variation of that pattern. For some reason the way you are doing it it makes sense, even though I wouldn't normally think it would.
Anyway, keep up the good work and I will keep tabs on it as you keep going with it.
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