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Nov 23, 2006 at 8:27pm
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Review: First Chp of Destiny
by A Non-Existent User
Hi Diana,

Haven't heard from you for a while. I thought I'd send you a review of this story. It's a good start to an adventure. Just needs to be fatten up a bit with more description.

I've emailed you a private review.

xx

KSeriphyn
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Review: First Chp of Destiny · 11-23-06 8:27pm
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