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May 25, 2006 at 8:57pm
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Following Schezar's example
by A Non-Existent User
Could a couple of you please check out this first chapter and tell me what you think? It's for the serial story. Need your opinions before I continue writing the third part.

http://lllnewsletter.proboards99.com/index.cgi?board=columns&action=display&thre...

Not asking for a review, just a sentence or so saying whether it's actually a good way to open the story or you think it needs more... oomph.

Thanks to anyone who replies.

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Following Schezar's example · 05-25-06 8:57pm
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